Friday, October 28, 2011

Homework Oct 27

Here is the project. Blocks 1 and 2 it is due Tues Nov 8.(As per class vote).
Block 4 it is due Fri Nov 4(As per class vote-and you won't have homework over the 5/6 weekend).Your project will be done.


Summative Identity Task 2011 Visual and Oral Presentation


HOW DO WRITER’S CREATE CHARACTERS IDENTITES THAT WE CAN IDENTIFY AND RELATE TO?


“Our identities are formed in a variety of ways, including our family, our opportunities, our choices and our hopes and our dreams.” unknown

Looking back at all the poems, short stories, articles,movie and discussions we have studied in this unit, your task is to think about the ideas and implications connected to the above statement.


v Select ten (10) powerful quotes or passages from any of the works we have studied.
PART 1- THE VISUAL (THIS CAN BE DONE WITH A PARTNER)

Create a visual, a photo essay, a movie, a graphic, a tableau, a skit, a mind map or some other sort of medium, to visually express/ explain/show:

1. How have the writer’s enabled you to identify with certain characters thoughts, feelings, actions values etc.

2. As you read the poems and stories, what images came to your mind and what quotes did you connect to those images as we looked into “IDENTITIES”.

3. Your visual will have images and quotes on it.

PART 2- THE WRITE UP (THIS MUST BE DONE INDIVIDUALLY)

You will prepare an individual write up which explains your choice of images and quotes.

Select seven (7) of the quotes and:

1. You will explain how the quote you chose helped you better understand the characters identity and why you selected that image to go with that quote. What does that image represent for you and how did the author help reveal the characters identity by using those words etc. Please explain (How/why is it connected to identity for you?)


2., Selecting the Essential Question you feel connects best with your visual write an overall statement that explains why and how it connects. Back it up with text support and make sure you explain your reasons. If you want to use more than one EQ go ahead.



Here is the rubric you have. The grid did not transfer over.

Exploration of identity theme

Theme is explored in extensive depth, ideas have been interpreted and personalized, Meaningfully chosen text support is included from multiple sources is smoothly integrated..
Has a solid understanding of the implication of the concept of identity
Has an insightful, original and detailed way in explaining of showing their identity

Theme is explored and clearly understood. Some interpretation and personal understanding is evident.
Text support is used to express point.
Theme of identity is explored and there is some interpretation (personal) evident

Theme is referred to and basic understanding is demonstrated. Some text support. Mentions identity and basic
understanding is demonstrated
Theme is basically referred to but understanding is weak
Little or No text support. Brief mention of identity)


Theme is not referred to understanding is not evident,
No text support
Written expression

Pieces are engaging and beautifully written. The writing is coherent and organized with a clear and effective pattern of development.
Writing contains few errors, if any.
Pieces are well written. Ideas are presented effectively, with the writing following a consistent organization and pattern. Writing contains some minor errors but does not distract the reader.
Pieces are functional and easy to read. Writing contains conventional spelling, punctuation and sentence structure in most cases, but revisions to the form and content of the written work could be made.
Pieces are incomplete. Frequent errors, distract the reader.
Incomplete Frequent errors, distract the reader

Method of presentation

Presentation is powerful and captivating, conveys theme, clear effective, engaging, unique choice of material shows an understanding of audience and purpose
Presentation is unique; theme is clear, focused, effective.
Choice of material shows considerable sense of audience and purpose
Presentation is functional, predictable, choice of material shows some sense of audience and purpose
Presentation is
brief
Presentation Not done
Delivery

Voice is clear & highly effective, organized, coherent
Voice is clear and easy to understand organized
Voice is generally clear, somewhat organized
Voice is clear in places, parts may be difficult to understand
Voice inaudible, no delivery

Wednesday, October 26, 2011

Wed Oct 26

Just a reminder that your good copy of your paper is due tomorrow. All the instructions are back a few posts.

Please hand it in with both drafts.

Remember to title your piece of writing and please put your name and block on it.

Thank you!

Monday, October 24, 2011

Peer edit sheet for draft 2

Peer Feedback: (Please comment on this sheet)

Please carefully check the writing piece to ensure that the following is included:

Have they included an introduction with a hook? (Underline in a colour or highlight).
Have you noticed a brief synopsis? (Underline with a wavy line).
Do they have quotes to support what they are saying and do they put page #’s at the end. (Put check marks if they have them? if they are missing).




Are all of their quotes clearly explained?




Have they ended a paragraph with a quote? If so have them explain it.
Did they include their sources at the end?
Did they write about identity and what influences identity(very generally)?


Did they give a brief background statement as to how their pieces etc are connected to identity?


Did they write about what authors do to make characters relatable?


Did they explain what authors do to create characters identity than order you can identify with?



Have they included a conclusion that connects back to their intro? (Underline in a colour or highlight the same as the intro).
Are their ideas straightforward; do they clearly explain their thinking? Then on back, please PRAISE, POLISH, PONDER

Thursday, October 20, 2011

Thursday Oct 20. 2011

Homework

Finish your final draft of your identity piece for Tuesday. You are writing about How authors create characters that we can relate to. See prevoius post for more details.

This piece needs to be typed so we can edit in class. Bring your laptop if you can so you can make the changes in class.

Your final copy is due on Thursday Oct 27, You will ened to hand in both drafts with revisions with your good copy on Thursday.

Have a good weekend.

Wednesday, October 19, 2011

Notes for Thursday Oct 20th

When you write about identity think about the following:



Your first paragraph should include what is identity and what influences identity(very generally)
Give a brief background statement as to how these stories etc are connected to identity.
Then you will want to transition to your next paragraph.

Over several paragraphs write about what authors do to make characters relatable.

What do authors do to create characters identity that you can identify with?

How do you see, feel, their identity? What makes them seem real?

How have the characters been shaped so you ”feel” for them?

As you write you need to bring in specific evidence from the text to support and explain what you are trying to say. To do this you bring in quotes/ examples.
Point
Evidence
Explain

Remember everyone always has to PEE.

After you have done that you want to conclude your writing. You sum up the factors that help make them real and you connect back to your intro.

Thursday, October 13, 2011

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Wednesday, October 12, 2011

Oct 12 HOmework

How do authors help create characters that you are able to identify with? (Use at least 2 stories and 1 poem. You can refer to your song , consider that extra though.)

Please make sure you peer edit this piece of writing. If you have misplaced the questions that you need to use they are here:

Peer Feedback: (Please comment on this sheet)
***** If they only have a sentence or two, please do your best and please make sure you answer the last question, the 3P's)

Please carefully check the writing piece to ensure that the following is included:

Have they included an introduction with a hook? (Underline in a colour or highlight).

Have you noticed a brief synopsis? (Underline with a wavy line).

Do they have quotes to support what they are saying and do they put page #’s at the end. (Put check marks if they have them, ? if they are missing).




Are all of their quotes clearly explained?




Have they ended a paragraph with a quote? If so have them explain it.

Did they include their sources at the end?

Have they included a conclusion that connects back to their intro? (Underline in a colour or highlight the same as the intro).

Are their ideas straightforward; do they clearly explain their thinking? Then on back, please PRAISE, POLISH, PONDER

Saturday, October 1, 2011