Monday, October 24, 2011

Peer edit sheet for draft 2

Peer Feedback: (Please comment on this sheet)

Please carefully check the writing piece to ensure that the following is included:

Have they included an introduction with a hook? (Underline in a colour or highlight).
Have you noticed a brief synopsis? (Underline with a wavy line).
Do they have quotes to support what they are saying and do they put page #’s at the end. (Put check marks if they have them? if they are missing).




Are all of their quotes clearly explained?




Have they ended a paragraph with a quote? If so have them explain it.
Did they include their sources at the end?
Did they write about identity and what influences identity(very generally)?


Did they give a brief background statement as to how their pieces etc are connected to identity?


Did they write about what authors do to make characters relatable?


Did they explain what authors do to create characters identity than order you can identify with?



Have they included a conclusion that connects back to their intro? (Underline in a colour or highlight the same as the intro).
Are their ideas straightforward; do they clearly explain their thinking? Then on back, please PRAISE, POLISH, PONDER